Novel back from line-editing!

The Gatekeeper's Son came back on Monday 20,000 words lighter.   Shannon's line-edit wasn't drastic,  just little cuts here and there but what a difference.   It reads better and the action never stops!  I'm excited to do the final fixes and move on to the next step.

Wierd weather here too

I know the rest of North America is getting hit by terrible weather so this will seem trivial.  But there's ice on this river near my house.  Never seen that before.

The waiting is the hardest part.

Well, the manuscript is still in the hands of my editor and will be at least another two weeks until it comes back.  I can't wait to read it.  Hopefully she didn't take out all my favorite parts (they probably need to go). 

The next step is finding an agent but I will stop and celebrate this monumental achievement:  I wrote a novel!

Getting into the next novel

I'm really getting into the planning of GKS2.  But it seems the more I plan, the more I see plot issues from book 1 that need to be continued or resolved in the new book.  In some ways, I think writing a completely new novel would be easier but there is still lots of adventures left for Junya and his crew.  I'm quite excited to see where they go!

The Gatekeepers Son II?

With the first book in the line-editing stage, I've begun storyboarding my next book.  I've already written 3 chapters but I don't want to repeat the mistake I made with The Gatekeepers Son, which was writing without a clear plan.  I had an outline but with this book I want to try the storyboard.  I'm a visual person and like the idea of seeing it laid out in front of me.

Thought I gave up?

I just reread the last post and had to laugh.  I didn't give up!

To get you up to date, I finished the rewrite and submitted it in early December 2012.  It came back in January 2013 with the usual message-cut another 100 pages, along with some major plot fixes.  I completed those by August but my editor couldn't get to it until October.  

When it came back, I was surprised that she didn't ask for another 100 page cut.  Instead, she had just a few plot issues that needed fixing.  The novel was the most cohesive version yet.  Inspired and happy, I attacked the rewrite.   As usual, amazing inspiration appeared just at the right time and inam so pleased with the outcome.

The final version went back to my editor in December.   The novel is done!  Line editing begins this month (January 2014) and then the next chapter begins... Getting an agent!

I'll keep you posted.

Has it been that long?

Since I last wrote, I finished the novel and sent it to Shannon.  That was in November 2011.  She came back with encouraging words and the task of removing 100 pages!  So here I am, plugging alone with that and was doing okay, up until April. Then a few things happened: first, I'm renovating my loft and after about 2 years doing that, light appeared at the end of the long tunnel!  The job was nearly done and encouraged by that, I devoted all my time to that -with real measurable results.  It looks amazing!

This also meant my writing has suffered and I began to wonder about my novel.  A year goes by so quick and unlike my renovations, what tangible result do I have? An unfinished novel with no apparent end in sight; just more editing and rewrites.  Bleak thoughts.  I have so many things to do; my life is busy.  I know I shouldn't   give up but, gods, after all this time and work, my chances of being published are so low.  sure, one must never give up but I am getting one year older every time my editor sends it back for more work.  Even if everything goes well, I'll be 50 in a few years...

I don't know.